Our first Adventure with Alice is in a similar League like the first Story, even if it’s a bit on the lower End. The Setting is quite the great one, even if I wish it was used a bit more or was fleshed out a bit. While I prefer the shorter and quicker Pace here honestly (a lot of the larger 12s Stories just left a lot to be desired, I find), this one could have benefitted from a longer Length. It all feels like it wraps up too quickly/neatly, which is a shame since the whole first Pages have a lot of Intrigue to them. The Art here works especially well and compliments the Story quite neatly, I find.

I loved the set up in this comic for what seems to be a larger arc! The Eleventh Doctor really suits these timey-wimey, meeting-people-in-the-wrong-order plots like this one hints at. I’m excited to continue reading and see what SERVEYOUINC really is!

The brain washed theme park threads of this story are rather lovely, ideas we’ve seen before but with a fresh coat of paint. The various references to people vomiting at theme parks are consistently funny.

Alice does not get as much to do in this story as Gabby does around this era in the 10th Doctor titan comics, she is more or less in the same place after her first alien world as she was beforehand. This simple one shot might not be the ideal place for fleshing out her character.

The story starts to falter a little when it moves onto an alien who is essentially draining park goer’s life force. It’s a trope that has been done too many times already in Doctor Who and almost always ends with The Doctor overloading the alien creature’s consciousness - as it does here.

I am intrigued by the epilogue though, a big bad who has met The Doctor in his future and knows what is to come - exciting!

I love me a good anti-capitalist message, but this story just doesn't really do much with it. We get another monster that feeds on emotions and very little else. It's enjoyable enough, but pretty bland.

Fun setting, nice set up, decent plot, nothing too much to write home about. I do like that it’s doing more with the the new companion, showing her skills and more contrasting her depression with surroundings, also some fun set ups. Do wish it was a longer first story too though