Stories Short Story The Wintertime Paradox Inflicting Christmas 1 image Overview Characters How to Read Reviews 2 Statistics Quotes 1 Overview Released Thursday, October 15, 2020 Written by Dave Rudden Story Type Christmas Time Travel Future Inventory (Potential Spoilers!) Sonic Screwdriver Location (Potential Spoilers!) Dublin Synopsis Inflicting Christmas was the third short story published in The Wintertime Paradox. Read Read Favourite Favourited Add Review Edit Review Log a repeat Skip Skipped Unowned Owned Owned Save to my list Saved Edit date completed Custom Date Release Date Archive (no date) Save Characters Twelfth Doctor Bill Potts How to read Inflicting Christmas: Books The Wintertime Paradox Reviews Add Review Edit Review Sort: Date (Newest First) Date (Oldest First) Likes (High-Low) Likes (Low-High) Rating (High-Low) Rating (Low-High) Word count (High-Low) Word count (Low-High) Username (A-Z) Username (Z-A) Spoilers First Spoilers Last 2 reviews 21 December 2024 · 235 words Review by JayPea Spoilers 1 This review contains spoilers! What if we took the end of The Lie of the Land, the end of The Idiot's Lantern, a Star Trek Holo Deck, and the movie Frozen, and put them all together? Apparently you get a pretty solid story. Off the bat, the setting here is pretty interesting and fun, future tech expo with a famous mysterious inventor with a huge crowd following. Then using holo tech to show off the inventor's old house, it reminded me a lot of Iron Man's first scene in Civil War. The story is pretty fun, getting glimpses into the inventor's head, and Twelve and Bill's banter, but when the inventor's son gets the tech and uses it to create a winter wonderland is where things really start going. The scene with the son and Bill is the standout here, Bill talking about memories of her mum and how she'd give up all those good memories for another day with her. It's a great character exploration for Bill, and her talking about reconciling with his mum works great in a way that it doesn't in The Idiot's Lantern because of that context, and because of her pointed remark towards the inventor as well. They've both made mistakes, they both need to work on it, and that's the main point, not that 'she's your mum', but that family relationships are important, and everyone deserves respect and communication in them. JayPea View profile Like Liked 1 13 December 2024 · 198 words Review by MrColdStream 2 📝5/10 Thworping through time and space, one adventure at a time! "A Christmas Tale That Misses the Spark" Inflicting Christmas brings the Twelfth Doctor and Bill to a futuristic Dublin convention centre for a festive adventure. While the story is simpler than the first two entries in The Wintertime Paradox collection, its longer length struggles to sustain engagement. Characters and Atmosphere: Twelve and Bill are written with care, capturing the sharp wit and camaraderie that defined their dynamic. However, the supporting cast and antagonists feel underdeveloped, making it difficult to become invested in the stakes. The setting, though vaguely described, evokes a faint echo of the rich atmosphere seen in Thin Ice. Unfortunately, it never fully comes to life, leaving the story feeling somewhat hollow. Final Thoughts: Despite its festive premise and familiar characters, Inflicting Christmas lacks the energy and depth to stand out. While fans of Twelve and Bill may enjoy their banter, the story’s atmosphere and villains fail to leave a lasting impression. A festive outing that starts with promise but ultimately struggles to deliver the Christmas magic. MrColdStream View profile Like Liked 2 Open in new window Statistics AVG. Rating22 members 3.41 / 5 The Time Scales AVG. Rating5 votes 3.50 / 5 Member Statistics Read 40 Favourited 0 Reviewed 2 Saved 1 Skipped 0 Owned 1 Quotes Add Quote Link to Quote Favourite Bill was learning a lot about screams in the company of the Doctor. There were the screams of soldiers facing something they’d never dreamed they would face. There were the screams you screamed in a dark and creaking house when your friends were vanishing left and right. There were the screams you gasped when your oxygen was running low. — Twelfth Doctor, Inflicting Christmas