The First Doctor #6
'Frayed' from Telos Novellas.
It's intriguing, I suppose, that this novella pushes Doctor Who into significantly darker places than I've ever seen it go before, however, I really cannot say that I am a fan of Jill, and her whole dream world, filled with blood and uncomfortable imagery, as she talks about Gods and her love for a veterinarian. The nightmare world that we return to frequently throughout the story is a very unpleasant place to be in, although it feels very far away from the medical colony and the "Future Deviants" and is tonally especially more icky than the rest of the story, which, dark imagery aside, is mainly focused on the with the medical staff having to become soldiers and all going a bit doolally and betraying one another and whatnot. Perhaps it's me but the novella really lacks descriptive detail, at least during action scenes, it kind of just says that things are happening and expects you to be able to picture it, which created another feeling of disconnect for me. The Foxes are an intriguing villain, a bit spooky, and I quite like the ending which isn't really a good or bad one.
The Doctor's involvement in all of this is fairly standard, and he feels much more like Ten or Eleven here, maybe just because this kind of metallic space station-type setting is frequent with them, due to the kind of jargon that he's spewing here being much more precise than I can imagine William Hartnell being able to relay without significant flubs, which other stories up until now have managed to represent better than here. Susan is put on the back-burner quite heavily, despite being put into a situation that explores her telepathy even further, it doesn't really do anything with it, she's just a bit of a helping hand. The explanation of The Doctor and Susan gaining their names here is a nice element, obviously overlaps other canonical events, but it's a fun idea and a cute way to make it more significant to them in their timelines.