Stories Short Story What I Did On My Holidays By Omo Esosa 1 image Back to Story Reviews Add Review Edit Review Sort: Date (Newest First) Date (Oldest First) Likes (High-Low) Likes (Low-High) Rating (High-Low) Rating (Low-High) Word count (High-Low) Word count (Low-High) Username (A-Z) Username (Z-A) Spoilers First Spoilers Last 14 reviews 19 May 2025 · 14 words Review by Rock_Angel Fun little prologue to the actual story im sad i didnt read it sooner Rock_Angel View profile Like Liked 0 13 May 2025 · 154 words Review by hallieday Spoilers 1 This review contains spoilers! The Fifteenth Doctor #19 'Where Did They Get the Pig?' (2025) from Doctor Who Magazine Special Edition 69. Including this little RTD-penned short story here because it hasn't been added to the site yet. While not really a Doctor story, I believe it's implied that Fifteen makes an appearance at the end. The rest of the story is a nice little prequel to Aliens of London showing how Margaret Blaine got her space pig. A good and quick read. The Fifteenth Doctor #20 'What I Did On My Holidays By Omo Esosa' (2025) from BBC Doctor Who website. Great to finally have a casual Fifteen story drop on the website like this. It's a good expansion on the opening scene of this week's The Story & the Engine, just adding that little bit more to the world and the storytelling. I definitely want more little things like this cropping up outside of short story collections and full NSAs. hallieday View profile Like Liked 1 12 May 2025 · 43 words Review by DontBlink 1 This is really cool! This is a short story prelude to The Story and the Engine and it's a lot of fun. It definitely made me excited for the episode, because Inua Ellams wrote a very engaging story here with some marvellous prose. DontBlink View profile Like Liked 1 11 May 2025 · 61 words Review by doctorwhoisadhd LOVE that we got a little bonus story from this episode! very fun!! i <3 tie-ins!!!!! the reason for my rating is bc my star ratings are for me to tell myself how much i personally enjoyed it btw. its very much written like a kid writing an essay and it very much does what it sought out to do! awesome :) doctorwhoisadhd View profile Like Liked 0 11 May 2025 · 17 words Review by connorpurnell99 Nothing super substantial, but does add a nice bit of background for Omo and the Doctor's relationship. connorpurnell99 View profile Like Liked 0 10 May 2025 · 71 words Review by 15thDoctor It is such a generous gift to receive such a gorgeously detailed piece of world building and character introduction in advance of a new episode. There is a sensitive and open heart to the prose which, while it didn’t set my imagination on fire, certainly did raise a smile and was as evocative in bringing to life the Nigerian setting and the character of The Doctor as it’s accompanying television episode. 15thDoctor View profile Like Liked 0 10 May 2025 · 34 words Review by Azurillkirby This was really nice and cute. I love stories written from the perspective of a child, seeing how they see the world compared to adults. When a writer can capture that... A+. Maybe A. Azurillkirby View profile Like Liked 0 9 May 2025 · 92 words Review by jiffleball 3 It's not a mind-blowing story but it is a lovely surprising, adding texture to the world we'll soon get to see. Doctor Who prose often feels divorced from other media. Sometimes that's to its strength (the 8th Doctor books have some real fun going their own direction), but it would be nice to see more crossover like we have here. Especially with the abbreviated seasons we have these days, which don't give us time for two-parters. Prequel, sequel, or addendum stories could really serve to flesh out what we get on screen. jiffleball View profile Like Liked 3 9 May 2025 · 58 words Review by EBP 1 I think it's a nice little environmental story. Fifteen is really written well here, like that feels like a good portrayal of the Doctor from the point of view of an outsider. I hope Inua Ellems writes more for the series beyond this and the upcoming episode. He has talent, and new talent helps keep the Whoniverse strong. EBP View profile Like Liked 1 9 May 2025 · 24 words Review by pezdizpenzer 1 Oh what a fun little teaser story. Ellams captures the Doctor perfectly and I'm even more excited for The Story and the Engine now. pezdizpenzer View profile Like Liked 1 9 May 2025 · 67 words Review by Guardax Spoilers 3 This review contains spoilers! A nice little intro prequel introducing us to Omo Esosa and his friend Blue as they take down an oil drilling operation as kids. They also meet the Fifteenth Doctor, who I am sure they'll remember for The Story & the Engine. The best part is how authentically it feels, of course coming from a Nigerian-born writer in Inua Ellams. Hoping for a great episode from him! Guardax View profile Like Liked 3 8 May 2025 · 716 words Review by MrColdStream Spoilers 10 This review contains spoilers! Thworping through time and space, one adventure at a time! “WHAT I DID ON MY HOLIDAYS BY OMO ESOSA – THE DOCTOR MEETS NIGERIA'S SHARPEST BARBER-IN-WAITING” What I Did On My Holidays By Omo Esosa is a delightful surprise prequel to The Story & the Engine, Season 2’s episode by Inua Ellams. True to form, Ellams injects the short story with warmth, cultural detail, and a strong sense of voice. Framed as a school report written by a young Omo Esosa—the Doctor’s future barber friend—it’s both an evocative period piece and a clever bit of character groundwork for the forthcoming televised story. Set in Nigeria in 1965, the tale centres on Omo’s summer visit to his grandparents, told in the playful, occasionally chaotic voice of a bright eleven-year-old. It’s a masterclass in tone: charmingly naive yet perceptive, brimming with the character’s personality. The piece feels genuinely like it was written by a child—right down to the refusal to write out his grandfather’s swearing “because I will get an F.” SUNSHINE, OIL PUMPS, AND REBELLIOUS FRIENDSHIPS The early sections of the story capture the simple joys and frustrations of rural childhood: heat, boredom, relatives who scold, and the thrill of unexpected adventure. Omo’s bond with Blue—a fiercely independent girl with a revolutionary streak—is a highlight. Their exploration of newly installed oil pumps and their moral outrage at the environmental destruction they cause gives the story an emotional and political spine. Their decision to sabotage the oil operation is impulsive and heroic in the way only kids can be—full of fire, consequence-be-damned. Ellams draws the reader into the local rhythms and textures of Nigeria with vivid ease. The dialogue captures regional flavour without caricature, using dialect and phrasing that rings true while remaining accessible. There’s a wonderful attention to place and people—Omo’s family, the gossiping adults, the threatening new industrial presence—all filtered through a child’s perspective. ENTER THE DOCTOR, STAGE LEFT (WITH A FIRE EXTINGUISHER) Just when things boil over—literally—with the oil pumps catching fire and the forest at risk, in comes the Doctor. It’s a classic entrance, understated but vivid: the Doctor as emergency responder, chaos-wrangler, and cosmic interloper all at once. The brief interaction between the two characters is instantly engaging, and tellingly, Omo doesn’t fall head over heels in awe. His scepticism, even in the face of this strange new figure, is a defining character note. This moment sets up their future dynamic wonderfully—Omo is clearly no pushover, even at eleven. His questions and doubts hint at the kind of adult he’ll become: curious, strong-willed, and unafraid to challenge authority, even Time Lords. It’s a smart way to give a supporting character from the show a compelling origin that enriches the episode to come. STORYTELLING ABOUT STORIES AND ENGINES There are scattered thematic breadcrumbs here for The Story & the Engine, with mentions of storytelling, technology, and the forces that drive progress—or destruction. Whether these are direct links or spiritual motifs remains to be seen, but it lends the short a pleasant sense of narrative foreshadowing. It never feels like required reading, but it deepens the series' world in a meaningful way. A SHORT STORY WITH BIG HEART This may be a short piece, but it manages to combine world-building, character development, historical texture, and a hint of sci-fi flair in just a few pages. It’s also notable for how authentically it centres Nigerian voices, history, and culture—without leaning on alien invaders or external threats. The dangers here are all-too-human: pollution, neglect, and the sidelining of young voices. That makes the Doctor’s arrival all the more poignant—a signal that stories like Omo’s matter in the grand scheme of things. 📝 VERDICT: 83/100 What I Did On My Holidays By Omo Esosa is a brilliant little gem—a pitch-perfect prequel that feels both like a standalone tale and a vital piece of the larger Season 2 puzzle. Inua Ellams brings his signature warmth and lyricism to the text, capturing the voice of a Nigerian schoolboy with uncanny accuracy and charm. With rebellious kids, ecological sabotage, a dramatic fire, and the Doctor’s surprise arrival, it’s a fast and engaging read that enriches the upcoming episode while standing proudly on its own. Here's hoping we see more of young Omo’s adventures—or at least hear him brag about them while cutting the Doctor’s hair. MrColdStream View profile Like Liked 10 8 May 2025 · 181 words Review by WhoPotterVian Spoilers 8 This review contains spoilers! A decent if rather basic Doctor Who story. It takes the form of an in-universe essay by a character who will presumably feature in this week's episode called Omo, and concerns an oil drilling operation in Etsako. What I Did On My Holidays is a story that feels very topical at the moment, with fracking remaining controversial, and the continued move away from fossil fuels. 'David versus Goliath' stories are always interesting, and here we have two kids essentially fighting the Nigerian government, by throwing stones at the drilling equipment and inadvertently causing a fire. Blue is a particularly likeable individual, being the activist who brings Omo onboard with the plan to stop the oil drilling, and I hope we see more of her in Saturday's episode. The Doctor's appearance is brief, coming at the very end to help Blue after she ends up injured, and using a hosepipe to put out the fire. It's always nice to get some more Fifteenth Doctor content, though, especially as this story is also written by the writer of this Saturday's episode, Inua Ellams. WhoPotterVian View profile Like Liked 8 8 May 2025 · 82 words Review by ThetaSigmaEarChef 9 A lovely little story that does what it's supposed to do: makes me excited for this Saturday's episode! The emphasis on imminent action to combat imminent danger, the need to protect your home from man-made environmental catastrophe created by corporate greed and enforced by a fierce, child-shooting military - and with fire being in almost every illustration. It's a very powerful image, and one I'm very glad to see after Lucky Day's much more pro-government/pro-military stance. Well worth a read. 4/5 stars ThetaSigmaEarChef View profile Like Liked 9