These stories are all bad but this is one of the least bad. The writing behind it is pretty close to being excellent, and the visuals are quite good. Giles continues to be the only problem.

IT WAS OKAY - 3/5

I know nothing abt BBV stuff that isn't probe so the cyberon stuff had me clueless. The day he stops reading the script off his screen is the day I can die happy.

Back to having some art of characters, but none of the glitchy effects that add to the atmosphere, some characters have photos not art which is inconsistent and weird

I think this might be better for having seen Cyberon beforehand

Baggs can't get the emotional side of this story across at all. I mean he can't for any stories, but this is another which really needs it

There's also one image they use which has a transparent part, so you can see Baggs' hair and wall in the back which is very funny

Some of this script also doesn't work as a report, or at least it's phrased weirdly for something that's meant to be one

2/10