★★★★☆ – Alright, yeah!

‘Look, there are all those bits that have cracked off the tree,’ Bretet said, making out like he knows all about carbon lifeforms. ‘Something must have put them there.’
‘Leaves,’ I said, remembering our last Earth lesson. ‘They’re called leaves.’

I love a story that describes familiar concepts in unfamiliar terms. There was a series of sci-fi novels written from different species’ perspectives, weren’t there? Some squid creatures or some such? Can anyone tell me what that was? Either way, it’s as titillating here as always.

I can admire the focus and restraint that this story shows. Kemp exudes somewhat of the quality of a Zen master: Countless trifling questions that would niggle at any sci-fi writer abound – How do these boulder creatures locomote? How do they, concretely, restrict the humans? Why are they such staunch environmentalists? – but she either lacks the impulse to get into them, or rightly recognizes that answering them would be liable to at best yield a “oh, huh” and at worst wreck the pacing or eat up precious word count.

The decision to set the story not from the freedom fighter’s perspective but from that of a doubter is an intelligent one – it partly replaces the default tension of “will they succeed or fail?” with a feeling of watching a trainwreck in slow motion. Not that the underdog perspective doesn’t work – far from it; it’s the popular mode for a reason and worked just fine for “Dreamer in the Dark” – but this feels perhaps particularly fitting for the theme and setup of this anthology: that it’s about Earth being thoroughly messed up in a series of freaky-deaky ways.

Incidental spoilers for (this short story and) Earthshock (Classic Doctor Who, 1982): In a rare move, this short story breaks from a particularly famous part of Doctor Who continuity by replacing the Cretaceous-Paleogene extinction event – rather than Adric on a space freighter, the Kyal from this story decided they’d had enough of theropods. Truly immaterial in the grand scheme of things – especially given that Doctor Who is preeminently unconcerned with “canon” and “continuity” – and perhaps the author hadn’t even seen Earthshock… but it’s fun to see such a concrete manifestation of Faction Paradox’s growth into its own entity, piddling though it may be.