I really liked the character stuff in this story, but unfortunately being part one of a 3 part story, it's let down by the other two parts

The Fountains of Forever appear is the first part of a multipart story, and it feels like it. The plot is an interesting setup to the rest of the story. The new characters are good, but sometimes are over-dramatic and talk in ways that explain for the audience. This is not necessarily a bad thing, but something that stands out a little. The art work was solid, with no noticeable 'off model' panels.