Stories Short Story Bernice Summerfield Anthologies Story: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 The Door into Bedlam 1 image Back to Story Reviews Add Review Edit Review Sort: Date (Newest First) Date (Oldest First) Likes (High-Low) Likes (Low-High) Rating (High-Low) Rating (Low-High) Word count (High-Low) Word count (Low-High) Username (A-Z) Username (Z-A) Spoilers First Spoilers Last 2 reviews 3 May 2025 · 113 words Review by kevinwho Typical Dave Stone. There's some pretty good story material in here, but as is his wont, the story is bloated, the narrative unfocused. He really does like to start a paragraph saying one thing and then drift off into side commentary like he got distracted by a butterfly or a shiny rock and forgot what he had started to say. This is saved, to an extent, by the fact that his diversions are often genuinely humorous, but it does make it challenging to stay engaged in the primary story. Personally, I think the story would be better served with less of that, but I think fans of Dave Stone's style will enjoy themselves. kevinwho View profile Like Liked 0 22 March 2025 · 19 words Review by megaminxwin i love the way that hell is described in this story. i should probably actually read the new adventures megaminxwin View profile Like Liked 0