Stories Short Story Puffin eshorts Story: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 The Dalmatian Terrain 1 image Back to Story Reviews Add Review Edit Review Sort: Date (Newest First) Date (Oldest First) Likes (High-Low) Likes (Low-High) Rating (High-Low) Rating (Low-High) Word count (High-Low) Word count (Low-High) Username (A-Z) Username (Z-A) Spoilers First Spoilers Last 2 reviews 8 January 2025 · 408 words Review by MrColdStream Spoilers This review contains spoilers! Thworping through time and space, one adventure at a time! "The Dalmatian Terrain: A Playful Start That Stumbles” The first official short story featuring the Fifteenth Doctor and Ruby Sunday aims to capture the lighthearted charm of their dynamic while introducing a quirky adventure. While it has moments of humour and intrigue, it ultimately feels like an underwhelming introduction for this new TARDIS team. The story kicks off with a casual, Brighton-based conversation about seagulls and fish and chips, setting a friendly tone. There’s a genuine attempt to establish the easygoing rapport between the Doctor and Ruby, with nods to their unique quirks—like Ruby’s sass and the Doctor’s eccentricity. The Doctor’s musings on K9, Beyoncé, and his ignorance of Usain Bolt add to his whimsical personality. However, the characters don’t quite feel like Ncuti Gatwa and Millie Gibson. The dialogue is playful, but it lacks the distinct energy and chemistry that these actors bring to their roles on screen. The obligatory mention of “mavity” feels shoehorned, serving as a faint reminder of the gag rather than a meaningful addition. The blue-spotted Dalmatian tailing the Doctor and Ruby initially feels like a whimsical twist but soon echoes familiar territory (Constant Companion, the Big Finish Short Trip with the Second Doctor). When the story shifts to a planet of Dalmatian dogs, it teases fascinating world-building but sadly skims over its potential. The culture, biology, or society of these canine inhabitants remains largely unexplored, reducing the setting to little more than a backdrop. Dame, the reptilian space criminal, is a standout. She’s cunning, manipulative, and intriguing, bringing a spark of menace to the story. However, her defeat feels too easy, undermining the threat she initially posed. The seamless teamwork between the Doctor and Ruby is fun to read, but the resolution feels rushed and simplistic. 📝Verdict: 65/100 The Fifteenth Doctor’s first short story is a mixed bag. While it succeeds in setting a lighthearted tone and introduces an intriguing villain, it struggles to bring the characters of the Fifteenth Doctor and Ruby to life in a way that feels true to their on-screen counterparts. The unexplored potential of the alien world and the derivative nature of the plot leave it feeling more like filler than a meaningful entry into the Doctor Who canon. A charming start, but this duo deserves sharper, more imaginative adventures. Like Liked 0 30 November 2024 · 84 words Review by hallieday Spoilers This review contains spoilers! The Fifteenth Doctor #09 'The Dalmatian Terrain' (2024) from Fifteen Doctors 15 Stories. My second favourite 15 story honestly after Rogue at the moment, and if it was more thoroughly stretched out and realised then it would make for a good televised episode. A lovely extended scene of Fifteen and Ruby at Brighton beach together, before they're whisked away to a planet populated with dalmatians and an evil lizard / seagull lady - a fairly fun villain. A very nice time spent. Like Liked 0