Was not impressed by this one at all, I just couldn't get into it and it felt like treading onto some old ground. The Vastra/Jenny relationship was also written like the author didn't know they were married. A shame as it's the only other 12/Paternoster story, but it's not great.

this was…neatly messy?

the characterisations were all over the place. i think the only one that was in track of themselves was strax.

i can’t believe they did jenny dirty like that, making her flirt with a man, when she’s so helplessly in love with vastra??? wtf??

i love clara, but she was also kind of annoying here?

as for the doctor, he was so bland. there were moments when he was close to his character in series 8, but other times he was just, static?

idk. it was good enough, just could’ve been better