Still has the same thing where it feels like the story is quite dumbed down for children as Amy's Escapade, but seeing this side of the story is quite fun.

Rory is written a lot less out of character (I don't for a second believe that Rory wouldn't've been able to recognise Amy in the shop though), and seeing the other side of the events is nice. This side of things also ends a lot less abruptly as well, and the joke that 11 was the one who took the doughnut in the first place is a nice note to end on.