After three stories in The Dead Men Diaries that I really enjoyed, this one just fell flat for me. At best it feels like it might be meant as a set-up for something to come later. Taken in isolation it felt like O'Mahony came up with some really cool visuals, tried to put them into prose, the end.

i cant help but feel like they could have done far more with the idea of a company stealing everything you have, especially considering its a glass company. transparency being vital or something, idk