Okay wow, starting right off implying covid is a conspiracy and there might be "something sinister going on under the guide of lockdown"

There's one point where there's a split in recordings and when it comes back the quality is worse, but also it was just a really weird place to start a new recording narratively speaking (given the latter one is talking about what happened back at base after the former)

Some of this also comes across as a bit fanfictiony, with the established character telling the OC that he's doing a great job and she knew he could do it (as if making him head of PROBE wasn't enough of that already)

2/10