Mission Report by UNIT Agent Bill Filer to Trap One - Subject matter: "Future Pain"

I think there’s a good set-up for a larger plot here with this “God”. I am looking forward to how everything turns out.

I did have a couple of niggles with this one though:

• The pacing of the story was really weird and all over the place. And a good ten minutes could probably have been cut for a more streamlined story.
• John Barrowman was phoning this one in so much!
• The sounds when Orr “transforms” are kind of grating.
• The sound design when the action with the giant slug thing happened was really, really bad.
• This one isn’t with the story, but rather that I know Mr. Colchester will feature in more stories - so I am basically just waiting to see how he is resurrected, my money is on this “God”
• I miss Gwen! Mr. Colchester is great, but I'm not really "vibing" with Jack in the Story Continues audios, Orr doesn't have much of a personality and Tyler feels too much like a blank slate.

End of report. Logged and filed at The Black Archive.