Stories Book Death in the Stars: A Melanie Bush Mystery 1 image Back to Story Reviews Add Review Edit Review Sort: Date (Newest First) Date (Oldest First) Likes (High-Low) Likes (Low-High) Rating (High-Low) Rating (Low-High) Word count (High-Low) Word count (Low-High) Username (A-Z) Username (Z-A) Spoilers First Spoilers Last 1 review 12 January 2025 · 144 words Review by Guardax I wasn't really able to get into this book. First off, the plot line in the first third is almost completely divorced from the eventual murder mystery that gets set-up. The main issue though is (and I can recognize this as a beginner writer myself) that the prose is quite simple and straightforward. Once the murder mystery gets set-up, we're given a ton of characters all at once and have to remember them all. Still, it was fun to have a whole novel dedicated to Mel, who is in the midst of renaissance in the 2020s. It was very sweet that Bonnie Langford put in tons of references to her career too. Honestly, I bet if I listened to her narrated audiobook I would've like it better. It's a fine read, but nothing special unless you want some Mel and Glitz in your life. Like Liked 0