Stories Webcast Captain Jack's Monster Files Captain Jack's Monster Files Captain Jack’s Monster File: Midnight 1 image Back to Story Reviews Add Review Edit Review Sort: Date (Newest First) Date (Oldest First) Likes (High-Low) Likes (Low-High) Rating (High-Low) Rating (Low-High) Word count (High-Low) Word count (Low-High) Username (A-Z) Username (Z-A) Spoilers First Spoilers Last 1 review 25 February 2025 · 116 words Review by JayPea This has some of the same problems as The Ood one does for me. It starts off almost feeling like an advertisement for Midnight, before then flipping to being quite eerie and then flipping back. The eerie tone seems a pretty jarring shift, though i do think it's done better here than the other mentioned file. The music choices really helps, it's a song that sounds happy, but almost too happy, when it flips back to being almost an ad again, you still get the sense that something's off, and Jack's tone and wording don't reassure you at all. I think it'd be better if they chose one tone to stick to, but this is fine. JayPea View profile Like Liked 0