I felt that this was quite good. It started off really strong, with quite an engaging premise. The protagonists are instantly likeable while the protagonists are instantly dislikeable. The writing felt increadibly competent and I also like how it is shot and directed. My primary critiques are that I feel some of the adult material doesn't really add much, and also because I felt that the ending was quite weak and abrupt, like they didn't know quite how to wrap it up.