I have to give credit where credit is due, trying something new with the poem telling most of the story was interesting and a lot more palatable than the regular rehash full of bad jokes. I don't want to be too harsh on it because it was fine, as far as poems written in this style go; there were a few lines that didn't quite fit the rhythm but for the most part it worked out.

I was a little disappointed at the return to form after, but it didn't have a lot of space to ruin everything with terrible jokes (though the ones that were in it were atrocious).