Again, just like it's Part 1, Time is a lot hornier than a charity short has any right to be.  I do admit some of the dialogue around Pond flirting with herself was at least funny this time, and the resolution of the whole TARDIS within a TARDIS was done in a very Moffat kind of way, but one that worked and kind of reminded me of how a Short Trip might end.  So overall it was alright, I guess.