The Monthly Adventures #054 - “The Natural History of Fear" by Jim Mortimore

I don’t think there’s a writer I’m more indecisive over than Jim Mortimore. The man eludes me, everything he writes teaters between a wealth of unique, mad and intriguing ideas and utterly pretentious lunacy. His use of description and philosophy is enrapturing but his abuse of experimental structures and cerebral, ambiguous plots just cause me endless confusion. And then he’ll go and write something like Blood Heat, which is just a bog-standard political thriller and it confuses me even more. The Natural History of Fear is undeniably its own beast; it rivals Scherzo for most original Doctor Who story, it is an Orwellian descent into insanity that doesn’t even star our main cast that just struggles to make itself make sense.

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Just like every Mortimore story (bar maybe one), The Natural History of Fear has one big defining aspect: its originality. A morose take on 1984 with some added philosophical debates, it’s a tale that barely even feels like Doctor Who; weird and unsettling and depressing and completely different from any other story. There is no reprieve here, people will die, the fascist, totalitarian leaders will prevail, our characters won’t win because it’s not even our characters. The choice to have our main cast, instead of being the returning regulars, as different people for a one episode is a mental choice that thankfully really paid off, every performance here is sublime, especially McGann’s and Fisher’s, the latter of whom I think is far more suited to playing antagonistic roles because this, A Blind Eye and Neverland are probably my three favourite performances from her. Of course, pretty much all of Mortimore’s strengths are on full display here; the atmosphere is palpable, exuding dark and gargantuan grunginess, a city choked in shadow and false light, which is how I, at least, pictured it, the great “voice of Light City” equipped with massive spotlights that shine onto darkened streets below. And that voice by the way is possibly my single favourite sound effect used in Doctor Who. The sound design is unbelievably good, Mortimore, also doing the audio as well as the script, knocks it out the park, everything sounds so vast yet claustrophobic and it ends up being the main reason the atmosphere is so effective, the world is enrapturing purely because of the wonders Mortimore did in the mixing booth. Another thing that really helped establish tone was the dialogue, which is pretty much perfect throughout. There’s a Jim Mortimore short story called From Eternity that amounts to basically a ten page monologue of a god describing watching the universe form and die and that cerebral, philosophical rambling paired with utterly stunning description is what makes up the dialogue here. Especially from McGann, playing the insane Editor slowly slipping away from lucidity as he talks of predatory information and the nature of thought. As for the story, well, we’ll get onto why it doesn’t really work, but one moment I must praise is the end. Not only for the insane twist that we haven’t been following a brain washed Doctor the whole time but just somebody imbedded with the Doctor’s personality but also the utterly haunting final sting of an entire city together in a revolution of questions, chanting “why?” endlessly until engulfed by chaos. It’s another marvel of sound design and simply a brilliant concept for a revolt against an Orwellian regime, the simplicity of the masses united in a mere question. Easily my favourite singular moment of this audio, mostly because it was a good concept executed well.

And that’s because the rest of this story is simply not executed well, at all. I’m sorry, maybe I’m just dumb or something but The Natural History of Fear is a narrative mess that makes absolutely no sense. Atmosphere? Dialogue? Vibes? Immaculate. Most of this story is just vibes, thriving on its unique atmosphere and enthralling tone but as an actual story, I don’t think so. I dare you to follow this plot and come out the other side with a complete understanding of what the hell just happened. This is my second time listening to this audio, and I assumed that on a relisten it would be easier to understand, I would know what was coming, I would be able to comprehend what I assumed to just be a complex and twisting plot. But now I see it just wasn’t thought out properly, this script thinks it’s a lot smarter than it is. Is somebody insane or waking up to reality? What is a hallucination and what isn’t? When is anything happening? Which character is which? So many times I found myself asking “what is going on?” and just not getting given an even slightly straight answer. This is a time when on the nose exposition was honestly needed because Mortimore can’t organically explain his plot properly; the world, maybe, but the story itself is so confusing, recycling actors and having twist reveals left right and centre, having characters go through something and then forget, so we’re not even sure if it happened, it’s so difficult to keep up with things and mostly because nothing is smoothly conveyed to the audience. It goes to show that a story can have a number of positives that greatly outweigh a number of negatives, and still falter because of the severity of the cons, this is one of the most confusing and infuriating plots I’ve ever experienced and it honestly makes me sad because so much of this story was so good and I was simply unable to enjoy a lot of it. Also, C’rizz is completely sidelined. It’s his second story and it feels like this script was written before he was even introduced, his roles could so easily be filled in by any random character.

The Natural History of Fear is an experience more than it is a story. It’s design, it’s ambition, it’s ideas and characters and dialogue are a joy to become absorbed in, to become lost in and the fact that it’s so hard to do something as simple as follow the plot upsets me, because it stops me properly enjoying what might’ve been one of the greatest Doctor Who stories ever had it come together properly. Unfortunately, all we’re left with is a pretty face with nothing behind the eyes.

7/10

Pros:

+ Undeniably unique and innovative

+ Incredible atmosphere throughout

+ A+ sound design that effectively builds the world

+ Really good use of description and language

+ The ending twist and final moments are glorious

+ Great performances all around

Cons:

- The plot is near indecipherable

- Terrible at making clear what’s happening at any given moment

- C’rizz is thoroughly underused for his first trip outside his introduction