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Review of The Awakening by KieranCooper

24 March 2025

  • Some key concepts are going on here that I think the story misses out on fully developing, the supposed psychic energy made by LARPing in full costume, and reenactment in the right environment is a paranormal phenomenon that really could have been a big part of the story
  • I think this story is maybe too short, 1 one part really could have had a little more time to let chaos carry out
  • Personally think Jane and Will could have made good companions, such character to them, especially Jane her dynamic with the Doctor was excellent
  • The mallus looks evil as heck, and I wished they used the symbolic face more, representatives of evil everywhere it's a creepy design that could have been used vastly more than it was
  • I just love the vibe of this story, echoes of the past, echoes of the paranormal, set in a tiny village. It's great, but probably needed a redraft

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Review last edited on 24-03-25

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