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20 January 2025
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Oh boi… this one was one I sat for a while, was it bad? No. Was it good? Also, no. Many already explained it quite well, while the Story itself is good, how Leela is handled is quite off-putting and feels very much like they forgot how smart Leela is and well putting her in this Situation is quite off-putting. While the Time Travelling Aspect of it all and the Idea on the Paper isn’t really bad, I think the Script needed a few reworking when it comes to the whole exotic dancer angel. For me, this is a perfectly well-made story in its execution. Louise and our Leads are great in it and do a great Job. There are some great Scenes, especially with Lalla and Louise. The Side Cast does a decent, solid Job, nothing too outstanding but nothing terrible. I appreciate that Gallifrey early on tries to touch on more explicit matters, but I think it was done in a very mixed Way. This one is a tricky one to properly articulate, all I will say is to give the Reviews from others a Read, they bring up plenty of great Points!
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