i feel like this story gets a slightly bad rep. just bc this story has sex slaves in it, doesn't mean the writer or writers are creepy. the hellfire club was a real club and this was the s**t that was happening. the pacing was as good as it could have been, being vka long it was. could have been shorter. but there was enough going on preventing me from going to sleep. i didn't care much for the zebidia doe subplot, made the writing feel a bit unfocused bc it had not much to do with the rest of the story, although it was nice having it converge at the end. the American accents are a bit naff except from rober jezek but that's just bc hes acc American. the brigadear's involvement served the story quite well. overall, theres not too much to praise, but you could tell there had been work put into it.