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Review of Fate & Fatality by MrColdStream

22 August 2024

🙏🏼C.Baker --> Fine!

Thworping through time and space, one adventure at a time!


The intro sequence here is a bit messy to my taste; I couldn't fully grasp what's going on. The story had me confused until it began dropping answers in the second half.

This story builds upon the faith stuff and the search for Balthasar introduced in the previous story.

The performances are altogether great.

The final stretch is where things turn interesting, as Balthasar is revealed and we learn a bit more about Garrison Case and his motives.

The story is slower, earth-based, and centred on emotions, faith, simulations, and other such things, and it doesn't quite carry the dramatic tension I had hoped for.

Tension is amplified towards the end, which helps to bring the story across the finish line.

RANDOM OBSERVATIONS:

  • It's sort of disappointing to end the story on a similar cliffhanger to Apokalypsis, even if the mention of Nerva Beacon has me excited for the third part.
Review created on 22-08-24