It's bizarre, I don't know if I like it or hate it, all I will say it's messy and bizarre.
There are Things to like here. It has a unique Atmosphere to it, which can hardly be denied, I find. The Core Idea is interesting, if a little iffy to me in places. The Performances do fit this Story, even if they are hardly some best. I don't mind the World building, and I think it's an Improvement for its Writer and his previous Monthlie work.
And at least it's not boring.
Yet, I feel like as a Story, it does leave a lot to be desired. Despite all those Things working for it, the actual Story leaves me cold. I appreciate its ambition and it's.. an Experience. I really don't know how to comment on the Story, because quite frankly I am not sure if I got this Story in the slightest.
I know this is a very messy and all over the Place Review, but I think it perfectly shows off this Story. A bizarre one.