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2 May 2025
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I was right there with it until the end. The story of Tony seeing Steven's ghost and of Viv seeing a different version of Steven's ghost is solid stuff, but throwing Jason in there at the climax didn't work for me. I think the story would have been better served by continuing to deal with Steven. And once it shifts away from the Tony/Viv/Steven story to a Benny/Jason one, it just ends, really. Not a word about getting people off the clock tower... It just really felt like the authors said "we're out of time, um...the end." That's how it felt to me, anyway. Pretty good for most of it, but in the last few pages it just seemed to want to forget the story it had been telling.
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