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25 February 2025
This has some of the same problems as The Ood one does for me. It starts off almost feeling like an advertisement for Midnight, before then flipping to being quite eerie and then flipping back. The eerie tone seems a pretty jarring shift, though i do think it's done better here than the other mentioned file.
The music choices really helps, it's a song that sounds happy, but almost too happy, when it flips back to being almost an ad again, you still get the sense that something's off, and Jack's tone and wording don't reassure you at all.
I think it'd be better if they chose one tone to stick to, but this is fine.
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